OUTLINE DUE: November 14
FINAL PAPER/PODCAST/POWERPOINT DUE: Monday Nov 19
* if you are choosing to do powerpoint or podcast, each paragraph should represent a slide
2. SAMPLE OUTLINE
Documentary: An Inconvenient Truth
Introduction/Thesis: In An Inconvenient Truth, Al Gore wishes to reach a large audience, particularly
nonscientists, to stress the urgency of responding to global warming. (AUDIENCE AND PURPOSE)
I. He establishes the ethos of a public servant whose concern stems from ethical and moral rather than
political motivation. (RHETORICAL DEVICE )
II. He provides an enormous amount of technical information, appealing to logos by taking advantage of a multimedia format.
(RHETORICAL DEVICE )
III. He relies on emotional appeals by juxtaposing what was or is with what might be—and, in fact, is likely to occur.
(RHETORICAL DEVICE )
IV. Gore acknowledges several counterarguments, but he refutes them with humor or alternative
explanation. (RHETORICAL DEVICE )
V. He uses his personal experiences, in particular anecdotes as a father and a brother to stress the deep commitment he has to this issue ( RHETORICAL DEVICE)Conclusion: An Inconvenient Truth effectively sounds the alarm for global warming by providing an
explanation that blends scientific information and human interest.
3. RUBRIC
Thesis
20 %, audience and purpose
are addressed as well as your central argument (Thesis)
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Poor
Student has not identifed the audience and has
not constructed a clear thesis or central argument
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Fair
Student has identified the audience and
suggested the central argument, but has not convinced the reader of the
purpose
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Good
Student has identified the audience and stated
the central argument by giving a thesis with support
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Excellent
Student has clearly identified the audience and
clearly stated the central argument. Writer's purpose is clear to the reader.
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Analysis of Rhetorical Strategies
40 % Student has chosen a
selection of rhetorical strategies to analyze and has given examples from the
film
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Poor
Student has not succesfully identified the
rhetorical strategies employed by the writer.
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Fair
Student has identified some of the rhetorical
strategies employed by the writer and alluded to examples of same
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Good
Student has identified several of the
rhetorical strategies employed by the writer and has given some examples.
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Excellent
Student has clearly identified at least 4
strategies employed by the writer and has given clear examples for each.
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Organization
20 % Student has effectively
organized his or her ideas in a logical, persuasive manner.
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Poor
Student has not mastered the art of
organization in the essay. Ideas are not logically presented and fluency is
an issue. Topic sentences are not clear - no transitions.
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Fair
Student has a planned structure to the essay,
however, lacks fluency. Needs better transition and topic sentence.
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Good
Student has a good structure - Topic sentences
introduce main ideas and transistions serve purpose of movement from one idea
to the next.
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Excellent
Student has an ecellent structure - Excellent
fluency with creative topic sentences and meaningful transitions
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Grammar, Usage and Mechanics
20 % Student has written with
style and maturity, varied sentence structure, vocabulary, and effective
compositional choices. Free of spelling, punctuation, and
grammar errors. G.U.M stands for grammar usage and mechanics |
Poor
Student lacks style and mature prose for junior
AP level. Proofread and correct spelling, punctuation and grammar errors.
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Fair
Student demonstrates adequate style and mature
prose. Some variation in sentence structure. Mostly free of G.U.M.* errors
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Good
Student demonstrates good style and mature prose.
Good variation in sentence structure. Free of G.U.M. errors.
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Excellent
Student demonstrates excellent style and mature
prose. Excellent variation in sentence structure and a firm grasp of
appropriate
G.U. M.
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http://teamcoco.com/video/obama-sways-the-undecided-voters (this is hilarious)
ReplyDeletehttp://www.youtube.com/watch?v=5hgJOzmXtWw&feature=plcp (I think this is satire but without the person who's doing it really knowing) -Crystal
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